Re: LYRICS #4

[Daniel Sletten <dsletten@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Here's another possibility:
> To jeodardize the course, upset the brunt

I can't even figure something out that makes sense for this line:
> Within their wall, their daunting formless keep

To be honest, it sounds like:
> Within the wall, there's no need for mesquite
(It's a BBQ song!   YEEEAAAAAAHH!)

Here's a nit-nit-NIT-picking observation:  it's not "to", it's "into":
> Just turn a coin, bring order into the fray
                                ^^

And I hear all variations of the following now:
> Who called the bane that made them stay as planned
> No one there in heaven could (they) ever reach
> No one bearing empathy could ever reach

I do hear an extra syllable in there (see where I added the "they"...)
Actually, I think it makes more sense with that "they" in there, too.

Finally, I don't hear:
>They had to stay
(though it fits with other proposed lyrics.)  I hear:
> They/I had no scar/star

Whelp, figurin them dern leerics out is nay imposseebil.
- -Dan
dsletten@xxxxxxxx



PS:
> Gibson's Les Paul may be the coolest guitar on the planet. Luscious 
> tone just melts right out of their gorgeous, solid bodies. From the 
> sweetest bluesmen and jazz virtuosos to the raunchiest rockers, every 
> hero plays a Gibson Les Paul.

Anyone who's listened to a Guitar Center add, read a rock-guitar rag, or
heard a radio spot for the G^3 concerts can laugh at this bit o' guitar-
industry phlegm.  ack!  <Better send away for my Perfect Pitch (tm) tapes
before I get my new Paul!>        or is it just me........